Monday, September 27, 2010

microfiction Monday #50...

The idea is to tell a story in 140 characters or less.

Why is that lady so sad?
Because she lost someone dear to her.
Where did they go?
I don't know, honey.
Will they come back?
No, not ever.

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  1. This makes me know that the lady sits and waits in vain...touching. I hope you have a great week. Cheers!

  2. Oh, sad. I like the realistic conversation between mother and child. Nicely done.

  3. Sad. [sniff] No wonder the scene is so blue.

  4. So sad. A clever take on the picture and conversation.

  5. How have the story be driven by onlookers. That idea never even crossed my mind.


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