Sunday, August 22, 2010

microfiction Monday # 45...

The idea is to tell a story in 140 characters or less.

"May I tell you, Holmes, I do so like your new look.Yes, I do see that you are quite thin and awfully pale. You must go out of doors more!"

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15 comments:

  1. EG CameraGirlAugust 22, 2010 at 8:23 PM

    Clever! He DOES look very pale indeed!

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  2. AnonymousAugust 22, 2010 at 8:26 PM

    Hi! I used Sherlock and Watson this week too--great post. Not sure that going outside is going to help Holmes at this point though.

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  3. Sylvia KAugust 22, 2010 at 8:41 PM

    He does look a bit the worse for wear doesn't he? But perhaps that was his plan -- to change his appearance! Great one for the day! Hope you have a lovely week!

    Sylvia

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  4. AnonymousAugust 22, 2010 at 8:59 PM

    LOL..Too funny. Very well done :)

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  5. JimAugust 22, 2010 at 9:18 PM

    Hey Tilden, this is novel! :)
    But... It's elementary Dear Watson, force feed poor Holmes with ice cream and chocolate cake.
    ..

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  6. KBAugust 22, 2010 at 11:39 PM

    Looks like he needs more than a bit of sun. Have a great week,

    Mine’s here.

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  7. PatAugust 23, 2010 at 1:02 AM

    Now that was a starvation diet Mr. Holmes went on. A cautionary tale to all anorexics. Good one!

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  8. moondustwriterAugust 23, 2010 at 1:33 AM

    Be hard in his line of work if he were all skin and bones ...

    have a great week

    moon smiles

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  9. jabblogAugust 23, 2010 at 2:41 AM

    The English are known for their understatement! LOL!!

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  10. MorningAJAugust 23, 2010 at 3:40 AM

    I think it's just a very clever disguise!
    Well done.

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  11. SouthLakesMomAugust 23, 2010 at 8:11 AM

    For such a great detective, I don't think Sherlock is being very observant!

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  12. Bill ~ {The Old Fart}August 23, 2010 at 10:01 AM

    I think it is a bit too late for Holmes to get a bit of Sun.

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  13. hopeAugust 23, 2010 at 7:22 PM

    Ah, those smart types never really LOOK at anyone they know, do they? Well done!

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  14. quillyAugust 24, 2010 at 8:04 PM

    I think Holmes might be in need of more than a bit of sun -- and Watson might be in need of spectacles!

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  15. Susan at Stony RiverAugust 27, 2010 at 11:24 PM

    Perhaps a weekend at Brighton together would help? (Love it!)

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