The idea is to create a story in 140 characters or less.
Janine stepped off the bus, a little scared. In the station, she grabbed a postcard and wrote:
Don't try to find me. I'm never coming back.
Run away to Susan's place, Stony River to see more microfiction Monday.
I guess Janine's dumber than a bucket of rocks.ReplyDelete
Is she running away with a lover... Villan father!!!;)ReplyDelete
But she did leave the wee hint, though, that she's in New York. Good luck, Janine--you'll need a lot of it.ReplyDelete
Disappearing in NYC is probably easier than in most places!ReplyDelete
Yeah let's see how long that lasts. LOL Well maybe longer than I think LOL :) Great take my friend. Happy MondayReplyDelete
go janine go!ReplyDelete
If she is young and niave, disappearing in NYC could be just a bit more permanent than she intended!ReplyDelete
Good for her, I think! Great microfiction. You'll have to do a sequel sometime and let us know if she managed to stay lost.ReplyDelete
I hope for Janine's sake that she was really at the bus station in Topeka--that would certainly throw someone off track!ReplyDelete
This one I liked a lot!ReplyDelete
Great Job Tilden
She knows what she wants. Great microfiction today.ReplyDelete
Great character - sounds like she's trying to convince herself as much as anyone else. I'd love to hear her story.ReplyDelete
Okay, this one sounds like the beginning of a film noire movie...will there be more? :)ReplyDelete