The idea is to create a story in 140 characters or less.
Janine stepped off the bus, a little scared. In the station, she grabbed a postcard and wrote:
Don't try to find me. I'm never coming back.
Run away to Susan's place, Stony River to see more microfiction Monday.
I guess Janine's dumber than a bucket of rocks.
ReplyDeleteIs she running away with a lover... Villan father!!!;)
ReplyDeletenice write...
spooky take,
ReplyDeleteloved it.
But she did leave the wee hint, though, that she's in New York. Good luck, Janine--you'll need a lot of it.
ReplyDeleteDisappearing in NYC is probably easier than in most places!
ReplyDeleteYeah let's see how long that lasts. LOL Well maybe longer than I think LOL :) Great take my friend. Happy Monday
ReplyDeletego janine go!
ReplyDeleteIf she is young and niave, disappearing in NYC could be just a bit more permanent than she intended!
ReplyDeleteGood for her, I think! Great microfiction. You'll have to do a sequel sometime and let us know if she managed to stay lost.
ReplyDeleteI hope for Janine's sake that she was really at the bus station in Topeka--that would certainly throw someone off track!
ReplyDeleteGreat post.
This one I liked a lot!
ReplyDeleteGreat Job Tilden
She knows what she wants. Great microfiction today.
ReplyDeleteGreat character - sounds like she's trying to convince herself as much as anyone else. I'd love to hear her story.
ReplyDeleteOkay, this one sounds like the beginning of a film noire movie...will there be more? :)
ReplyDelete