Sunday, October 24, 2010

microfiction Monday #54...



The idea is to tell a story in 140 characters or less.



Joan looked at Bette with disdain and
hissed to Mae, "She has no shame!"
Bill saw Bette had no bra.
Bill said to Seamus "That's my girl! 
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15 comments:

  1. Sylvia KOctober 24, 2010 at 8:23 PM

    Great one for the day, girls will be girls and when they are, they're frequently nasty! Hope you have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  2. PatOctober 24, 2010 at 8:40 PM

    Oh that Bette, what a shameless hussy, especially in 1945! How times have changed. But the guys haven't changed in their interests.

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  3. k. riggs gardnerOctober 24, 2010 at 8:45 PM

    I also looked at Bette with disdain.

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  4. PeggyOctober 24, 2010 at 9:15 PM

    Yay, but he won't amrry her. He'll probably want Joan when he gets around to marriage.
    Good use of each word!

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  5. EG CameraGirlOctober 24, 2010 at 9:54 PM

    Hmmm. I wonder why each of them attended this reunion when no one seems to like anyone else. I want to read more!

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  6. Lisa Ricard ClaroOctober 24, 2010 at 11:32 PM

    And...guys will be guys, no matter the year! And girls will be---meow!---girls. LOL Loved it.

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  7. DianeOctober 25, 2010 at 8:00 AM

    That wild gang! Love it!!! :O)

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  8. hopeOctober 25, 2010 at 9:57 AM

    And I can hear the withering glances as much as the wagging tongues. Well done!

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  9. septembermomOctober 25, 2010 at 11:53 AM

    Now I can see those sly looks :) Great job!

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  10. Kay L. DaviesOctober 25, 2010 at 1:21 PM

    Oh, yes, I see which one is Joan, and who she's sneering at. LOL

    Kay, Alberta

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  11. Maude LynnOctober 25, 2010 at 1:36 PM

    Shameless!

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  12. AnonymousOctober 25, 2010 at 2:55 PM

    I think Bette was just a woman 'ahead of her time'...fast-forward to 1969 and she would have fit right in!
    Great story this week. Cheers!

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  13. Susan at Stony RiverOctober 25, 2010 at 4:06 PM

    I'm glad Bette's got her priorities (if not her boobs) straight!
    ROFL

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  14. MelliOctober 25, 2010 at 5:20 PM

    AH! This is in HONOR of Breast Cancer Awareness month huh? She was just lettin' those gals BE FREE!

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  15. quillyOctober 26, 2010 at 12:17 AM

    Oh. I didn't realize that you knew my family that well!

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