at the beach, with great care, she set him down.
she turned, spread the towel, and he was gone.
turning back, her heart sank to the deepest depth it could go.
searching waves and sand, alone she panicked.
yesterday’s storm, created a drop.
he sat below it, using a tin spoon.
she saw it flash.
Motor on over to G-Man's place at Mr Knowitall to see more Flash Fiction 55...
i originally posted this at http://okellyn.wordpress.com on august 11, 2007
It is good that she saw the flash from the spoon?ReplyDelete
Very mysterious 55!
Mine is here
Have you an AWESOME weekend!
Thank goodness she saw the flash. Very mysterious I must say and well done. Have a great weekend :)ReplyDelete
Oh my goodness...this was a heart stopper!! Excellent.ReplyDelete
My 55 for the week, is HERE As always, scroll down past my Friday's Show n Tell to find it. Have a glorious day.
May she reach the boy in time. Please make it so!ReplyDelete
I'm up at:
Friday Flash 55 ~ Silvia's Smile
yeah, hoping for a happ ending on this 55. my greatest fear is that somehing happens to my kids.ReplyDelete
my 55 is up!
all the meds in the world wouldn't help this panic! you evoked a chilling fear within me in just a few moments of time, amazing! an awesome 55!ReplyDelete
I think she was crazy, and there was nothing there.ReplyDelete
Excellent 55 Tilden.
Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Oh, my heart just stopped for a moment, then started beating again at the flash. Great job in 55 words!ReplyDelete
remember those heart stopper feelingsReplyDelete
very well conveyed
mine is at the beach too "family outing" http://moondustwriter.com
Excellent story, Nancy. You had me holding my breath!ReplyDelete