
at the beach, with great care, she set him down.
she turned, spread the towel, and he was gone.
turning back, her heart sank to the deepest depth it could go.
searching waves and sand, alone she panicked.
yesterday’s storm, created a drop.
he sat below it, using a tin spoon.
she saw it flash.
Motor on over to G-Man's place at Mr Knowitall to see more Flash Fiction 55...
i originally posted this at http://okellyn.wordpress.com on august 11, 2007
It is good that she saw the flash from the spoon?
ReplyDeleteVery mysterious 55!
Mine is here
Have you an AWESOME weekend!
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shakira
Thank goodness she saw the flash. Very mysterious I must say and well done. Have a great weekend :)
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness...this was a heart stopper!! Excellent.
ReplyDeleteMy 55 for the week, is HERE As always, scroll down past my Friday's Show n Tell to find it. Have a glorious day.
May she reach the boy in time. Please make it so!
ReplyDeleteI'm up at:
Friday Flash 55 ~ Silvia's Smile
yeah, hoping for a happ ending on this 55. my greatest fear is that somehing happens to my kids.
ReplyDeletemy 55 is up!
all the meds in the world wouldn't help this panic! you evoked a chilling fear within me in just a few moments of time, amazing! an awesome 55!
ReplyDeleteI think she was crazy, and there was nothing there.
ReplyDeleteExcellent 55 Tilden.
Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Oh, my heart just stopped for a moment, then started beating again at the flash. Great job in 55 words!
ReplyDeleteremember those heart stopper feelings
ReplyDeletevery well conveyed
mine is at the beach too "family outing" http://moondustwriter.com
Excellent story, Nancy. You had me holding my breath!
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